Wait ’til Dawn

28 10 2011

Misty,

almost morning, but not quite:

space between tree limbs

still holding in the night.

Did I hear a footfall?

or a morning dew’s drip

hitting the forest floor?

can’t  see through the darkness

to safely open my cabin door.

A new day

not ready to be born:

don’t know what’s out there.

In the distance, a fog horn,

a warning: stay inside?

Too much hidden from view,

Wait ’til the light

chases away the gloom

and the shroud of night,

and whatever might be hidden there.

Then step outside, when daylight peeks through,

fine moisture barely tickles your skin,

light enough to melt the shadows away,

though hardly dawn,  still dim.

It’s safe to venture out, 

a new day’s begun.

©Janet Mitchell, October 2011

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3 responses

11 07 2012
jannatwrites

Well, if I had that feeling I shouldn’t go out, I’d certainly wait. The night can be scary especially since the shadows conceal so much that is in plain view in the daytime.

11 07 2012
cuhome

A feeling we’ve all had, I’m sure — creepy!

10 07 2012
cuhome

Reblogged this on thoughtstomull and commented:

Perhaps it’s best to listen to that sense that says “wait until the light – don’t venture out into the night” . . .

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